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  Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position.

  试题分析

  一 条件: 对青年人成长的影响/有人认为家庭的影响最重要/有人认为朋友的影响最重要.

  二 要求: 你同意何种看法? 举例说明自己的观点

  三 写作分析: 题目的含义是家庭和朋友对青年人都有影响,分歧在于这两种影响中哪一种最大. 纯粹为写作目的,可任意确定一种观点,先表示同意,然后找理由为自己的观点辩护.也可用分析法,将不同的情况与不同的人分开,说明各自的特征.本题与心理学和社会心理学有关,若能用其说明,效果更佳.

  Of the various factors that can have influence on young adults, the family and friends stand out most. But there is disagreement on which of the two is the most important of all factors. My view is that in most cases, it is friends who have the most important influence on young adults.

  According to social psychologists, when children become young adults, they undergo some psychological changes. When they are young, children love their parents so much that they simply adore them, imitating their speech and behaviour and trying to learn everything from them eagerly. As they become older, however, they begin to see that their parents are not as perect as they thought, though they still consider their parents better than any other adults. But the process of change still goes on. BY the time they are adults themselves, they have changes so much that they take their parents as equal adults belonging to a different and out-of date generation. Consequently, they go out more often and the influence of their parents begin to decrease.

  With the image of their parents as perfect or imperfect idols gone from their minds. Young adults turn to the outside world. Those whom they are associated with most are those who are of the same generation. These youngsters drink, smoke,chat, and play together, and they share the same or similar views and values. At this stage, they may not be able to find new idols, but they certainly influence each other in many aspects. They may also be influenced by many other factors in the outside world, but, comparatively speaking, the influence on them comes mostly from those around them——young paople who are their friends.

  Of course, not all children change in this way. Some of them may still stick to their parents, or even their elder sisters and brothers; and some may turn to their teachers. But, generally speaking, at a certain stage, friends are the most important influence on young adults.

  范文写法说明

  文章认为朋友的影响最大,但采用了分析的方法,说明了家庭影响有大到小的变化,也对不同的情况作了区分.

  第一段: 从题目题条件引出自己观点

  第二段: 父母的影响由大到小的变化

  第三段: 后期的影响主要来自朋友

  第四段: 区分情况,进一步说明.

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