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I Enjoy Teaching

2006-07-29 14:53

  In the summer holidays of last year, I had my first experience of being a teacher —— to teach my little nephew.

  My nephew was five years old, and he was very naughty. When I asked him to count the numbers, he would ask me when we would have dinner or where his mother was. At first I felt it very tiring to teach him and at one time, I wanted to give up it [give it up] (1)。

  However, I wouldn't let the chance go easily to practise being a teacher. I believed the saying, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” So I tried my best to be my nephew's good friend at first, and then learned things together with him. Sometimes I told him funny stories and taught him some songs and so on. He sometimes could not help laughing at my funny stories. Several days passed. He began to be interested in what I told him and asked me many questions about what he had seen. I tried to give him the best answers. At present [Before long] (2) he could count up to 100.

  I found that he began to enjoy learning more. And I was pleased, too, that I had learned how to teach a student like him. From this, I have also got to know that I need to have patience if I want to be a good teacher. I've also come to understand how much effort that our teachers have made in order to teach us well.

  I really want to say that I enjoy teaching.

  广东外语师范学校  黄以泰

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  题材很有趣:学生学当小老师,品尝当教师的甘苦,从而更加理解教师对学生的爱,教师要教好学生所必须花费的心血。文章语言表达也较好,某些不足之处点评修改如下:

  (1)give up是“动词+副词”构成的短语动词,当宾语是代词时,必须置于动词与副词之间:give it up.当宾语是名词时,放在副词前后均可:give the chance up,或give up the chance.注意区别“动词+介词”构成的短语动词,不论宾语是代词还是名词,一律置于介词之后,如:look  for a job/look for it.

  (2)根据上下文意思,改为before long(=soon)较好。

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