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08年6月四级写作预测-收入差距
2008-6-12 15:46

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
  1. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是合理的;
  2. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是不合理的
  3. 收入差距对社会的影响

  ●审题概述●

  议论文,根据题目要求文章可分为三点:收入差距的合理性;收入差距的不合理性;对社会的影响。在叙述第一、二点时,可适当地的展开一两个小点。注意各点之间的衔接,以及论证的逻辑。

  ● 范文●

Income Gap

  ①There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it ②reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. ③In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high ④efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay.
  ①On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they ②risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is ③another point to ④back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction that they obtain from work.
  ①As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may ②motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too wide, however, our government should make some policies to ③get rid of its negative consequences.

  ◇第一段思路点评:
   收入差距的合理性

  ◇语言点提示:
   1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接点题
   2 reflect 意为“反映”
   3 in one's view 意为“在某人看来”(分析观点时常用词组)
   4 efficiency 意为“效率”

  ◇第二段思路点评:
   收入差距的不合理性

  ◇语言点提示
   1. On the other hand:意为“另一点、另一方面”(提出相反观点,与上文衔接)
   2. risk doing something 意为“冒险做某事”
   3. another point: 提出另一小点
   4. back up 意为“支持”

  ◇第三段思路点评:
   收入差距的影响

  ◇语言点提示
   1. As anything has two sides, so……… 议论文常用句式
   2. motivate:意为“激励,刺激”
   3. get rid of:意为“摆脱,除去”

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